Thursday, August 13, 2009

Haiku: Imagination and Smoulder

These two aren't really Haiku - there's no reference to nature for a start. They're more like Twaiku (mini poems posted on Twitter that are 5-7-5 syllables). These ones fall under the category of #HotHaiku.

You shoot me that look -
The one that makes me smoulder.
It's been a long time.

You brush right past me,
All my senses come alive.

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