tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4552987570766516740.post7229710619247297614..comments2023-03-31T01:00:38.670+11:00Comments on Ten Seconds a Day: #fridayflash: The Insurance PolicyLily Mulhollandhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09804113718224654006noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4552987570766516740.post-90622070921099755112010-05-09T12:19:06.579+10:002010-05-09T12:19:06.579+10:00It would have made Laurita's job of choosing s...It would have made Laurita's job of choosing so very hard. I liked this one a whole lot, too.<br />(OMG, the wooden boobies on that boat are humongous!)Cathy Olliffe-Websterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12729578896443750402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4552987570766516740.post-74490005086788230352010-05-04T04:32:59.068+10:002010-05-04T04:32:59.068+10:00Very nice. Aye, laddies...
Well written, and the ...Very nice. Aye, laddies...<br /><br />Well written, and the pirate speak was excellent. I felt like I was on that ship.<br /><br />Very enjoyable.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4552987570766516740.post-20635275127883250182010-05-03T12:24:25.644+10:002010-05-03T12:24:25.644+10:00Oy, matey, ya should-a posted this on Talk Like A ...Oy, matey, ya should-a posted this on Talk Like A Pirate Day. ;)<br /><br />So the plan is to sacrifice her to the sea? I think she'll get Fletch to let her loose before it comes to that. He's already spell bound.<br />~jonJ. M. Strotherhttp://www.jmstrother.com/MadUtopia/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4552987570766516740.post-56352770737904428002010-05-03T03:58:47.752+10:002010-05-03T03:58:47.752+10:00Good story! I also enjoyed the dialog in this one....Good story! I also enjoyed the dialog in this one.Eric J. Krausehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05774468607814244185noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4552987570766516740.post-48666614665612774542010-05-01T07:39:50.356+10:002010-05-01T07:39:50.356+10:00Lovely! You'd think they'd've learned ...Lovely! You'd think they'd've learned with the first one. I hope this one gets her revenge. You hint that she will. :)<br /><br />CeciliaCecilia Dominichttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12799727636246434837noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4552987570766516740.post-6665672434892747572010-05-01T05:48:04.629+10:002010-05-01T05:48:04.629+10:00The voice in this is spot on and utterly charming ...The voice in this is spot on and utterly charming as well. A great feat.<br /><br /><br />marc nashSulci Collectivehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03293833259808943096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4552987570766516740.post-63581072133793677292010-04-30T23:20:57.288+10:002010-04-30T23:20:57.288+10:00Excellent! Loved the whole feel of this. Haunting ...Excellent! Loved the whole feel of this. Haunting story.Laura Enohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09982794146667832204noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4552987570766516740.post-23972427048571157462010-04-30T21:08:10.173+10:002010-04-30T21:08:10.173+10:00I really enjoyed the dialect too. It was one of my...I really enjoyed the dialect too. It was one of my favourite things about this one. You write the sea well.Lauritahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03688820247531607677noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4552987570766516740.post-28670412708676521562010-04-30T19:23:25.773+10:002010-04-30T19:23:25.773+10:00You've created great atmosphere here. I'm ...You've created great atmosphere here. I'm a little unsettled-- is this a real practice they used to do, or something you've imagined? I suspect it's real. Haunting story.Jenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01425418200940737247noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4552987570766516740.post-7264576638204276512010-04-30T14:01:53.807+10:002010-04-30T14:01:53.807+10:00Hope she's a witch, too. Next escape spell sho...Hope she's a witch, too. Next escape spell should be coupled with a sinking enchantment.John Wiswellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07416044628686736927noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4552987570766516740.post-53352985243368591712010-04-30T12:45:09.540+10:002010-04-30T12:45:09.540+10:00Excellent story, and picture!
Agree with Carrie a...Excellent story, and picture!<br /><br />Agree with Carrie about the dialogue.Marisa Birnshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17945909737147497606noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4552987570766516740.post-87860438265353674262010-04-30T12:39:41.866+10:002010-04-30T12:39:41.866+10:00To be honest, I don't think i could write pira...To be honest, I don't think i could write pirate speak if I wanted to. Excellent work.Genevieve Jackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16178276724159826428noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4552987570766516740.post-60722668546724834902010-04-30T12:05:54.951+10:002010-04-30T12:05:54.951+10:00Nice. You nailed the dialect really well here. Lik...Nice. You nailed the dialect really well here. Liked the ending.Carrie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05093923008179106837noreply@blogger.com